My life in haiku

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Here Jane talks about what is close to my heart, haiku.

Please watch this vid, you will understand where I am coming from.

So, what makes a haiku is not counting syllables it is how you present it. I want you to See what I saw, to experience what I experienced.

Try and keep your haiku short, to be spoken or read in one breath. Try and use concrete images and avoid metaphors and similes.

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Some haiku

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door slightly ajar
letting in flies and a
slice of moonlight

after the divorce
the rattle
of empty hangers

a white daisy
just a white daisy until
the red dragonfly

wild flowers
up to my knees
in moonlight

A cascade
of wild flowers
at my feet

Mom’s pictures
not knowing at first
a youthful me

after the bar
the drunks lean into a
non-existing wind